Broken Wings

I like being called Nae. But I'm still furious at Ky for weaving the name Sarah to me! - Naera Ko is what everyone calls me. I don't really have ...

After thirteen years of living there, she would know that you can't hear anything through stone, unless it is really, really, REALLY loud. I think this whole passage is pointless. ...

Horror of course! - Sabl Er...what's a movie? - Kohan ~~~~ What is the first thing you do when you wake up?

Haha, that was great! I loved the whole thing, it drew me in right from the start! Nothing wrong with it; I like the whole diary thing. I've never done ...

XDXDXDXDXDXD nice picture Bob! *dies laughing*

Yes, she is being sarcastic. Thank you, this was actually one of the few short stories that I am proud of. It's just one of those things that you just ...

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I have too many duties! Good thing I don't have to become king; I'd die! - Kohan I do what I want, when I want, and no one can stop ...

I can't remember....I think it was about dragons... o,o

How is this for a better prologue? I hope it pleases you a little more Myth! :wink: ~~~~ _____ I crouched low to the stone floor. At the moment it ...

O_O You stole my name! But besides that, this was a pretty good piece. Some typoes that I would consider going through and finding. I can't critique too much with ...

Hahahahahahaha, I'm with Trident!

I know this is the third story I've posted, but this one is finished. Well, close to finished. Just a little editing, most likely. Dedicated to my friend whose name ...

This is a piece of chapter one that I'm still working. I wrote it up really quickly, but critique to death if you want. No really, please do. ~~~~ Chapter ...

Is that the end of the story? Or is this going to be chapter book? Because if that's the end.... :shock: *inches away from Myth* I didn't find anything that ...